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Wow great stuff

I can tell that you worked on this really hard. I can see the effort that you put into it and the outcome was truly great. I feel that the fight was great, and the powers were creative, the animation was clean enough to watch and the music was good. The only problem that I would say is that maybe some of the sound effects that you used for some of the actions were a little off. I mean to say that they were not sounds that really seemed like they would go there (But maybe that's just an opinion). Good work, nevertheless.

There was one thing...

With the whole movie, as an animation, and a sprite one at that, it was simply amazing. The fighting was smooth, sound was good, and the look was slick. As a Matrix recreation, as somebody ealier had said, it isn't like the movie, but it's an original thing and I judge the animation first. It was great but didn't really fit the expected theme. It's okay though, because you were limited by the sprites, I suppose.

Wow, this is really something

This animation, is really great. From the music to the originallity of the way you presented your improvement. I was very impressed. It's is always good to see when someone improves on animations and you have shown it here. Hopefully you will beable to animate a great movie, but in your spare time it would be nice if you continued to make flashes cause you could make some really great stuff. Good Luck!

Jasmerrin responds:

Wow, thanks. That was a very nice review. I wish I had more time to do more portal submissions, but so far I've really only gotten enough time to do one major project in a year... Maybe I'll try to get in on some collaborations, or to make some shorts or something. I've always wanted to be a bigger part of the Newgrounds community.

Thanks again!

Wow, good stuff

IT has almost everything. A good plot, good length, nice animation, origial ideas (as far as the incorporating drawings and such), and sound effects. I'm surprised this didn't get on the front page, as good as it is. I look forward to seeing what you can do with full drawings, but sticks are nice. Many people said this, but the music is an important part of the movie. It helps spread the move of the animation, and if the fighting wasn't so compelling, the fact that there was no music would have really bothered me. But anyway, good stuff.

Wow

At first, I was watching this and I was thinking, "What is so great about this that it got on the frontpage?" Then I kept watching it and towards the middle I got really impressed. This is some good animation and the music wasn't half-bad either. Keep animating you will make some great stuff.

heheh

I didn't really laugh at first when I watched this becasue I figured that you were just trying to make a lame funny joke, then I thought about it a little bit and I smiled becasue it WAS funny. It just took a little thinking.

You did a good job of recreating the madness graphics, or whatever their called. you didn't just rip off of Krinkles, you had an original 'story' and it was funny. Good job, I voted 5.

Moved

Yes. I was moved by this animation. At first, I though, "Oh no, a bad stick flash by Allan Awesome?" Then the bullet was shot. Actually, the dialogue before the bullet was pretty funny, but anyway, the bullet was well animated. I kept watching to see what was happening next, the bullet became more animated, and I could tel you worked hard on this. And to boot, there was a moral to the animation! Very nice. But it leaves one question to ask. What about those stick flashes that are very well done, like the Shock series by Terkoiz or Jcamelo's movies? Those are stick flashes but very popular. I'm not doubting you, but this brings up questions to me.

Very Nice

Funny stuff, good animation. Well done!

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